LI: To create your own comic strip of an imaginary conversation.
My comic strip shows the conversation I imagine these two people had after one of the men had sneezed his teeth into the sea during a fishing trip. This was also a collaborative DLO where I worked with Mayshar from Room 5. I found this activity interesting because I've never had to imagine what the people in the film are talking about.
Kia ora Haylee, this is Elle from the Summer Learning Journey team.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your Fishy False Teeth comic!
I really like how you’ve interpreted the comic as if one man is playing a prank on the other man! It’s a great twist on the story and you can clearly see you’ve utilised your imagination and creativity here! I also really like your use of capital letters to demonstrate stronger emotions in the characters - this is great story-telling!
Maybe next time you could upload a screenshot of your comic on it’s own so that it stands out on your blog, as it is a bit hidden in the slideshow, but otherwise, fantastic job!
I’m glad that the activity encouraged you to do something you haven’t done before and that you found it interesting. What do you think would happen next if the comic had a part two?
Well done and I look forward to seeing your future blog posts!
Ngā mihi,
Elle (SLJ)
Malo e lelei Haylee,
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading your blog post today! The best thing about it is that you have added the complete presentation which is very important for the reader to actually know what we are talking about. I also liked the way you have written your story in your own words through your comic as I can imagine what the characters are saying in more detail. I found this activity interesting as I got the chance to portray the story as I wanted. What did you find interesting in this task and why?
Keep up the great work!
-Sakshi